by Clell65619
1 Reviews
Category: Harry Potter -
Rating: R - Genres: - Characters: -
Published: 2007/10/22 - Updated: 2007/10/22 - 1905 words - Complete
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(#) JaCeeisme 2008-10-13 08:17:30 AM
Clell, I love your stories, but you might want to do a minor edit to this chapter to avoid confusion.
In the 8 ball scene, You have Harry playing David. Just a bit confusing, unless you are thinking back to the decathlon stars of the mid 90's (Dan & Dave from the Nike ads, one made it to the Olympics and the other crashed and burned)