by Clell65619
3 Reviews
Category: Harry Potter -
Rating: R - Genres: - Characters: -
Published: 2007/10/24 - Updated: 2007/10/24 - 1575 words - Complete
Reviews
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(#) xandrian 2007-10-24 04:47:26 PM
I'm really enjoying this story, especially your use of Neville. Looking forward to the rest.
Author's response
Neville's the man.
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As you said, Neville's the man. As always, your scenes with Voldemort were among your strongest. Great work with the last one especially. I'm glad Harry had a bit of a role in this chapter, even if it was fairly minor. Looking forward to more.
Author's response
I'm not sure why you feel my Volde scenes are strong. In this fic I mostly abuse hand humiliate him, working from my belief that the Tom Riddle of canon is an idiot, and I just emphasize that in this fic. More Harry-centric chapters are coming up from here, perhaps his best characterization is when he interacts with the goblins, which he will for a few upcoming chapters. I uploaded 10 more chapters today, enjoy.
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(#) koppe 2007-10-27 03:30:25 AM
Go Neville!
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I rather like your Neville. But it's obvious Harry hasn't lost his magic. Riddle is really going to regret doing that ritual, isn't he?