As you said, Neville's the man. As always, your scenes with Voldemort were among your strongest. Great work with the last one especially. I'm glad Harry had a bit of a role in this chapter, even if it was fairly minor. Looking forward to more.
I'm not sure why you feel my Volde scenes are strong. In this fic I mostly abuse hand humiliate him, working from my belief that the Tom Riddle of canon is an idiot, and I just emphasize that in this fic. More Harry-centric chapters are coming up from here, perhaps his best characterization is when he interacts with the goblins, which he will for a few upcoming chapters. I uploaded 10 more chapters today, enjoy.