(#) lucy_heartfilia2457 2012-01-01 03:01:55 PMthis is a awsome story, please continue it!
the only thing i would say would be try seperating the paragraghs so its easier to read
Her only way out. She was going to take it. Finally she was going to be free from this ugly world. B...
In: Yami no Matsuei
In: Doctor Who