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The City Is At War And The Sun Is Your Worst Enemy
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2007-11-03
This story is kind of.... Well, sort of.... AMAZING.
Okay, let's be frank--- This story is kick-ass. I love the way you write. Such beautiful imagery. =D
But, if I could critique--
It would be to lengthen your chapters a bit more.
----Besides that, IT ROCKS!
Seriously. =DDD
Update soon?The City Is At War And The Sun Is Your Worst Enemy
(#) PanicFOBAcademy26 2007-12-16
I agree with the above review, chapters should be longer, but I love your story!!! I wanna read more, so update soon!!!
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