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Line In The Sand
3 ReviewsVery Short Scene: Harry and his team are a private crew. Needs Beta.
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Line In The Sand
(#) teutelquessir 2006-02-08 08:31:23 AM
You love run-on sentences... ;)
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Line In The Sand
(#) Noctivagus 2006-04-12 08:38:46 PM
That was lovely. I laughed out loud. The way you built scene as oh-so-cool and serious, then Bunji comes out with some shit like that - it's just like him! And all of them by some miracle keeping straight faces until Arzac was gone, then falling to pieces. It all screamed real camaraderie to me, easy friendship, which brought it all together. I love fun little shorts like this.Author's response
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Line In The Sand
(#) -Balladbird_Lee- 2008-08-07 04:09:15 PM
LOLZ! XD Loved it! I don't normally like short stories, but this one was awesome! ^^