An accident sends Harry Potter into another world and soon his talents are needed more than ever before. The question is not whether he can win, but can he survive? [HP/Dresden Files crossover]
- This is an interesting story. HP X Dresden Files crossovers always interest me to some extent. Your story has some awkward phrasings, and I believe it could use some fixations. Odd usage of words aside, this story has loads of potential.
It'd be interesting to see how Harry would try to overcome the... err... 'misunderstanding'.
Do write more.
Author's responseWell, what can I say? My first language belongs to another language group than English and so it's almost impossible for me to not make mistakes that seem very stupid to native speakers. I try my best to avoid them, though. Actually, you can find a bit more polished version of chapter one at FF.net. Thanks for reading!
(#) impatientuser 2008-08-04 10:51:56 AMBloody amazing. This has the promise to be the best HP crossover I've ever read. The action scenes are intense.
At first I was a little disappointed over the idea that Harry was not good at his version of finesse magic, but you have overcome my objections.
Thanks for writing =)
(#) chrisguy9017 2009-11-19 12:28:09 PMCool new chappy. I am glad you seem to be going with him falling into the mechanisms of the summer fae unlike others who did the crossover that outright alienate them. I know they will have a alterier motive but I think he should be naive enough at first to fall for the glamor. Maybe she can have like his first born and by doing that anchor him to their world and have it over him but again it seems like something a winter fae would do.