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• Bella Rising

  (#) DrT 2007-11-22

  I'm curious if these are the only four canon characters you'll be following, but I guess I'll see as the story develops
  
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• Bella Rising

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-11-22

  I come a bit further and say, make with some more characters, and be quick about it. Not that I don't like what you've written so far in this one, but it's not a Harry Potter fan fiction without Harry Potter, even if it's a minor role. You left his character kind of in the lurch with his Ginny dying like she did. I'm curious, too, to see what happens with Pansy and Millie, however, I think with Harry being an experienced orphan and somewhat wealthy, he can lend a hand in helping the two ladies out with some financial backing as well as provide some support to the children. Just thoughts. Lastly, too short of a chapter, but I guess that an update on Thanksgiving is worth the while. :)
  
  Geovanni Luciano

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and responding. Harry will be featured in upcoming chapters.
  He's not the only war orphan in the mix either.
  N!

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