Axl wants to pierce his nipple. I also tried writing Izzy differently, and I think it kind of messed up. *hides*
- great story I really love the Axl crying and Izzy trying to control Axl.
Now see I just gave you a great review on you're story. At least you can be nice to me. We're not all perfect. There just stories.
Author's responseI'm glad you liked it, but I can point out at least three errors just reading your sentence. Honestly, you seem to have no grasp at all of the English language. I could understand if you're not a native speaker, but I highly doubt that's the case, as your writing is nothing but painful to read; you got my criticism in my other review, I don't think I need to repeat myself anymore.
- why are you being so mean to me I didn't do anything to you. All I try to do is be nice. but you wont let me. I give you great comments on your stories and I'm American by the way. Why do you have to be so mean. I know my stories are not that great. It doesn't have to be perfect.
Author's responseUm, here's the thing, I know stories are not perfect, there's really no such thing as perfect, and my stories to have a few mistakes, but honestly, your stories are absolutely nothing short of painful to read. They are HORRIBLE! I think that goes beyond having a few errors. Your formatting sucks, you have no grasp of the English language, and your stories are nothing but sets of actions with absolutely no flow.
- who cares if there's errors not every body's perfect. It's just stories.
why can't we just put this past us. moonlight is a good friend of mine we talk everyday. She knows my righting is bad. But she's not mean about it when she tells me.
Author's responseI'd really like it if you'd only review a story /once/. Every extra little message like this is spam in my inbox. And Rach isn't mean to you because she's too nice of a person. She just complains to me and I come tell you that you suck.
- what ever sorry if my stories are not as good as yours. fuck do you really think I care I didn't do anything to you. So I don't know why you're mean to me. And what the heck does Rach tell you. Yeah maybe your stories are better than mine. And yeah I don't know how to right but you don't have to be so mean.
god I just everybody leave me alone
Author's response"god I just everybody leave me alone"
I tend to respond to all reviews I get, and I very rarely contact, as in email, people who review my stories, so if you want me to leave you alone, stop spamming my inbox with all these stupid messages in my reviews.
- I just want to know what has Rach been telling you
Author's responseShe's been telling me a lot of things and I'm too busy at the moment to go looking for direct quotes, which are what would be proper in this case, so I'll get it to you eventually. But what I can tell you is none of it's very good.
- I didn't do anything to you your just mad because I said that that one was a bad story and yes I know it was a bad story but that wasn't to you. your jsut nothing but mean.
Author's responseActually, most people find me pleasant and intelligent, but a lot of less mature people are rather jealous of me and say I'm mean.