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Chapter Three.

by deaths-destruction 3 Reviews

Big secrets then big sickness.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2007/12/06 - Updated: 2007/12/07 - 1509 words

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  • What's not meant to be is going to be meant to be.

    (#) jewsicax 2007-12-08 09:19:21 AM

    i very much enjoy this story!
    you are a very good writer
    its getting intense!!
    please please please update?!
  • What's not meant to be is going to be meant to be.

    (#) x_iero_addiction_x 2007-12-08 04:16:24 PM

    aww that went from all cute
    to OH NO NOT BRENDON
    hehe =]
    this story is GREAT!
    And yes it is easier to read like that with the paragraph thingys.
  • What's not meant to be is going to be meant to be.

    (#) xSoMeOnEx 2007-12-08 08:43:45 PM

    its not that is harder to read its just that i think you should try and connect each of them.
    see lets just picture is a play. (cuz my imagination is pretty wide and i do imagine them doing whatever you write)
    so usually when you get a scene its everything that revolves around that place and time in one scene.
    I think i'm not making myself clear.
    For example, there are part were its sort of the same shit happening but you divided up and it kind of gives the impression that something different is about to happen when in fact its the same.

    Oh forget it, i probably just confused the hell out of ya.
    XP

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