Harry decides to do what he can to fight Voldemort. Ron and Hermione bashing.
- "He and Riddle were meant to have their fates intertwined, an unwilling pair of destiny. Thinking of him and Riddle as a duo caused Harry to laugh out loud, a duo was one to many he would have to kill the spare."
Now that is a classic line, especially the last sentence. I'm going to be looking forward to seeing -just- how far he ends up going and who, if anyone, is with him at the end of his journey. I don't think Tom quite appreciates the values of patience and persistence and that'll end up biting him.
- I'm always a bit surprised at the amount of Hermione bashing out there. I mean the girl can be a bit naive and uncreative at times. That and falling for Ron Weasley are one of her few character failings.
The formatting of the story could be improved. I had a hard time reading the story because of that. Other than that it could become an interesting read if you continue your story. Not much else to say about a short story like that.