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Stu's Imagination
2 reviewsOne of my first fanfictions. Silly in the end. And so suspenseful you'll have to change your underwear at the end!
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Stu's Imagination
(#) jerseystrato 2006-08-29
Awww... it's a cute story. Nice to see a Stu-centric story too, even if it's a little ficlet. I love the sounds of just another crazy occurence around Mineral Town.
One thing though, all you have to do is seperate quotes, starting a new paragraph with each new speaker. Other than that, nice work! I thought you meshed Stu's imagination with the real events really well.
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