- OMG i hate cliffhangers!!!!
- Wow! This story is getting interesting! :)
BTW, this is some constructive criticism: Try spacing out your paragraphs (Some of your words are bunched together, and it makes it kind of hard to read), and spacing were the characters speak. Like this: "I love you Ryan, 'cause you're special!"
"I love you too Brendon!"
See? Makes a difference. But other than that this is a very good story and I hope to see more from you soon!
(#) medicatedlives 2007-12-11Haha, I love how Ryan's acting. Please, update soon!
- love it
this is simply amazing
i cant wait for more
(#) x_iero_addiction_x 2007-12-14Intense.
haha late review, sorry =D
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