Categories > Celebrities > Panic! At The Disco > What's not meant to be is going to be meant to be.
Chapter Five.
3 ReviewsNo, don't run away!
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What's not meant to be is going to be meant to be.
(#) jewsicax 2007-12-11 01:59:45 PM
OMG i hate cliffhangers!!!!
please update -
What's not meant to be is going to be meant to be.
(#) StripesCO 2007-12-11 02:24:09 PM
Wow! This story is getting interesting! :)
BTW, this is some constructive criticism: Try spacing out your paragraphs (Some of your words are bunched together, and it makes it kind of hard to read), and spacing were the characters speak. Like this: "I love you Ryan, 'cause you're special!"
"I love you too Brendon!"
See? Makes a difference. But other than that this is a very good story and I hope to see more from you soon!
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What's not meant to be is going to be meant to be.
(#) medicatedlives 2007-12-11 09:33:56 PM
Haha, I love how Ryan's acting. Please, update soon! -
What's not meant to be is going to be meant to be.
(#) xSoMeOnEx 2007-12-13 12:15:21 PM
love it
this is simply amazing
i cant wait for more -
What's not meant to be is going to be meant to be.
(#) x_iero_addiction_x 2007-12-14 08:25:52 PM
Intense.
haha late review, sorry =D