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While Love's On The Line
3 ReviewsFrank Iero is so hopelessly in love with his girlfriend that can't seem to realize that she doesn't really care for him. His new friend Gerard Way might be able to fix that, though [[Frerard]]
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While Love's On The Line
(#) ThisSUICIDE 2007-12-26 12:14:53 AM
I really like this story, update soon please. Good work. I really liek the story line, and I love how Gerard was so straight forward in the third chapter, calling Frankie's girlfriend a bitch. Lol. And, Frankie making cookies, eally cute he made them in the shape of hearts. But she thre them away =(Author's response
Yes, I know, I hate writing mean things about Frankie from Wilona's point of view. None of what she thinks is true! -
While Love's On The Line
(#) xxwalkthedeadxx 2008-03-25 01:57:52 AM
i REALLY love this story. haha i like reading the stories later so there alredy finished and i dont have to wait :[ uhm, wilona IS a bitch. i love all the drama i actually kinda started crying lol. i was kinda predicting in the last chap i read (ch 16) that frankies gona commit suicide. AWWW haha [[this is my first reviewy thing, forgive me if im not doing it right :)]] u do really well at describing all the scenes and whats going on and the relationship between frankie and gee is realy sweet and special. PLEASE dont end the story soon its SO SO SO FUCKING good :]]]] UPDATE UPDATE QUICK QUICK QUICK!!!! forget all your other prirites and UPDATE hahaha jk... no seriously UPDATE NOW. :]Author's response
Haha thank you! Your review was perfect. Perfect just like My Chemical Romance. -
While Love's On The Line
(#) MyChemtasticFools 2008-06-06 01:44:36 PM
Yooooo yooo, you like pickles? I do