- wow! that was ridiculously well written!! i really liked how much that actually sounded like something pete would write! seriously impressed!! the description was great!! i liked and disliked how you didnt really find out what exactly happened - thats whats cool about one-shots i guess! :)
anyways, i really really liked it!
Author's responseThanks a ton, man!
I'm reaally glad you liked it! =)
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-02-03Glory be! That just blew me away!
My, my. What to say to such an amazing piece like this? I'm utterly speechless. It's brilliance is undefinable. Each sentence---no---each word had captured me and drawn me closer to the scene painted with intricate metaphors. And I REALLY liked how this sounded like a real person. I could see Pete writing something like this. Gosh, I'm rating and favoriting.
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