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The Pain

by KKluvsherguitar 1 Reviews

How i feel

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters: - Published: 2006/01/22 - Updated: 2006/01/23 - 201 words

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The Pain

(#) InuKag 2006-01-22 09:51:38 PM

you know... i just dont get the feelings that i should from this poem... i think you need to find words that better suit the way you are feeling. some of the lines dont make sense but the general idea is good. i think that you should check some spelling to. Always do it in word or something before you post it.. i just dont get the ambiance that i need from this.

luve you tho Kayla.

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