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The Pain
(#) InuKag 2006-01-22
you know... i just dont get the feelings that i should from this poem... i think you need to find words that better suit the way you are feeling. some of the lines dont make sense but the general idea is good. i think that you should check some spelling to. Always do it in word or something before you post it.. i just dont get the ambiance that i need from this.
luve you tho Kayla.
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