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Innocence over Dentention

by IWCT 2 Reviews

Orochimaru remembers the only detention Sarutobi ever gave him.

Category: Naruto - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Humor - Characters: Jiraiya,Orochimaru - Published: 2008/01/01 - Updated: 2008/01/01 - 3254 words - Complete

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  • Innocence over Dentention

    (#) tsuchi 2008-01-09 07:30:36 PM

    This story rocks so hard. I've never really thought about what Orochimaru was like when he was still a student, but I can totally see this happening. I wish I could rate it more thna once. Really. But I can't.

    Author's response

    Ah, wouldn't that be nice for me. Thanks for the review, as it lead me to your stories which basically made my night.

    I have a slight fixation on Oro-chan as a teenager. The idea tickles a rib somewhere. I wrote another drabble about Oro as a sixteen year old. He just makes wonderful "past fic" fodder. I'm glad that you like this piece. I was uncertain about it. Oro/Jiraiya yaoi kept trying to intrude, but then wouldn't co-operate with the mood of the fic, and have to get cut. I felt the uncertainty of dancing on the edge between friendship (my original intent) and lust/twisted love (my secret popcorn of fandom) detracted from the story.
  • Innocence over Dentention

    (#) Desolira 2008-03-10 01:44:45 PM

    This made me cry.

    It's so good it made me cry.

    You've made Orchimaru human. I love it.

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