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(#) crystalcrash 2008-01-05 07:54:10 AMI think it's kind of dumb that Gee wouldn't tell Frankie about Mr Hot just bc the bitch was going to tell Frankie about Gee being gay. So? It's better than knowing that Frankie is with a cheating whore.
Why did Frankie suddenly change idea and almost kiss Gee? In every other chapter he was all shy and wierded out whenever Gee got close to him.
Damn waiter! Lol. When they finally kiss i'll be able to breath easy xD
Cute chapter even though i hate that girl more every day.
Author's responseDamn it, there's so much stuff I screwed up on...I realize that now that you pointed it out. Ahhh...I guess I'll have to clear things up in the next chapter. Or maybe I'll rewrite this chapter, just the ending.
(#) crystalcrash 2008-01-06 11:49:43 AMAww, i didn't mean to say that you screwed anything up, I love your story! I just thought that Gee was dumb for thinking the way he did! hehe.
I must admit that i like the ending more now, its fantastic =)
Can't wait for more
Author's responselol, that's okay, I didn't get offended or anything. Your reviews are REALLY helpful, so seriously thanks so much.