Frankie meets Kat, they don't start off well. Gee gets in trouble! :o
(#) asherschick 2008-01-05 01:35:09 PMYou described this chapter really well in the end, actually. I'm still in 'awww' mode. '"Hey..." said a weak voice, "trying to take advantage of me while I'm unconscious or something?"' that line did this to me!
So we now know that Gee has enhanced healing abilities, which would make him an excellent fighter, I guess? But I still can't believe nothing happened to him , Mauritius said 'do it' and they must have done something to him - they couldn't have just turned around and left!
And Frankie's powers are definitely on their way, yay!!!
I've never watched Charmed but I'm a Harry Potter geek, too - I mean really, I even wrote a letter to Rowling once!
Hopefully quick review?
Author's responseVery quick review =)
Lol, i liked that line cute too.
You should download Charmed, if you liked Angel, you'd probably like it too! I loved Phoebe even though she had the suckiest powers.
Next chapter will be up when i finish fixing it up.
(#) ilovemikey 2008-01-06 03:32:41 AMWah? They beat up Gee!!
But he's okay, so I guess it's alright. I like how Frankie saw it in a dream... maybe that's his power?
I'm gonna go away and puzzle it over.
Author's responseYes, poor Gee. He gets all the bad things lol
We'll soon find out... xD
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-01-06 07:33:18 AMGod fucking damn it! I just started reading this today, and I'm totally hooked and powerless. You're an amazing writer, I love your descriptions and imagery. And the plot is just like...WOW. I adore it, can't wait for more.
Author's responseYou just made me a very happy person. Thank you so much for the sweet comment! =)
I'll get the new chapter up soon, hope you enjoy it.
(#) Disenchanted 2008-01-06 12:30:31 PMI can't believe I didn't think about checking out one of your stories before. This one is SO effin' good! I completely agree with IeroMyHero, with everything she said. I'm favoriting this, au revoir mon cherie.
Author's responseThank you very much! I'm glad you like it. Thanks for favoriting it too
(#) sleepyfaerie 2008-01-06 12:42:21 PMoooh...
this fic rocks!
I love the fantasy aspect
I've never read a Frerard in fantasy
it is slightly confusing, but it certainly keeps you very invovled with the story
can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's responseThanks =)
You'll understand with time, don't worry.