i really like your story.
update sooon :-)
OMG, I love this!
I just can't beleive how much of an ass Frank is!
Update soon :]
ugh, that's horrible!
you need to add more DIALOGUE when they talk :) instead of just saying "he made a rude comment, I flicked him off" lol
it's Frank haha.
Frank, rude much? God what an ass.
I bet it was Frank that came to the beach after her...
Write more soon plz ^_^
Sign up to review this story.