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• you can keep my brother

  (#) hopeanne 2008-01-12

  Okay so my review for the last chapter didnt show up, just disappeared into ficwadiness. Either that or the ficwad guy didnt like my you can keep my whore comments for the chapter before that and banned me!
  but whatever. I said pretty much the same thing as everyone else, begging for it to be Gerard, some random threats if it wasnt. the usual.
  So I am soooooooo glad it was him. Not so glad he brought liz, but I like to think she weaseled her way in. I dont trust her.
  This was such a good chap. Im not sure what to really say. I dont want to pick it apart and analize every line like I always do.
  Gee and Sky are so stubborn. Bob was right. they never listen to each other. They only hear what they want to.
  Im so happy Gerards sober and all but Im worried that like something bad is gonna happen before he knows that she knows that he loves her and shes not with Billy.
  Its sorta romeo and juliet like sorta. like of how he kills himself thinking shes dead cause he didnt know she was faking and then he kills himself?
  gah.
  its giving me those kinds of feelings like a false hope for them and I hope im wrong.
  

  Author's response

  Aw that was such a pretty line! The romeo and Juliet one, tragic but shiny! lol.
  I noticed there's no a Liz club which is sweet!
  Gah my tired mind is babbling again!

• you can keep my brother

  (#) hopeanne 2008-01-12

  Oh and matt says hes not sure what to say cause he dont know your story, but hes more then willing to reenact the billy reaching up michelles dress scene if you want it dirtied up a little for the whore story.

  Author's response

  Humph.

• you can keep my brother

  (#) _cranium_ 2008-01-12

  wow they actually talked, i'm amazed:)
  i liked their conversation, like before they started talking about the serious stuff and skyler got mad and walked off. you cuold see that coming though lol
  but i really liked the whole thing with uncle vernon/albert, the drunken cake dude. "he looks kinda busy" lol !
  i was suprised that bob said anything, he seems to be the kind of guy who doesn't like to get involved, someone who just shakes his head when disapproving. it's good he did that though, and it's even better that skyler actually listened. maybe she figured that when someone like bob starts trying to talk some sense into her then it's a fucking big deal. i could picture bob waving his hands and trying to make things sound really simple and skyler staring at him and nodding.
  ok so liz and gerard aren't a coupple. thank you. now i don't have to strangle anyone=] altough iwas sort of looking forward to having a good reason to be extra aggresive and violent haha
  gerard loves skyler. skyler loves gerard. gerard's gonna kick billy's ass ( again ) . i'd like to add "liz loves gerard" cause i'm still not sure what liz's intensions are. i have this feeling in my guts that she'd love to be more than friends with gerard. i've grown to loath the chick.
  gerard said "so that's why he answered everytime i called" or something like that.. so basically.. the incident i'm so mad at billy for has happened before? him asnwering the call and telling gerard, more or less, to fuck off? so does that mean gerard has been the mature one and skyler didn't even know? damn billy. ok maybe he was thinking about what he thinks was best for skyler, but that doesn't mean he knew what's best for her. he can't just act like her mother, or well maybe not like sky's mother but any other over-protecting, stupid, know-it-all mother. what if skyler went through all this for nothing? well obviously it was good they broke up cause gerard got ckean and sober and skyler somewhat grew as a person but .... damn billy!!!!
  i'm sort of looking forward to gerard kicking his ass, i really hope he's gone to find him. i'm starting to like billy less every minute. he used to be 'the good guy', taking care of skyler, keeping her refrigerator full and all that but geez he's just plain stupid.
  anywaayy....
  the chapter was awesome, they actually talked. well it was still sort of messy like their conversations always were but if they find gerard they can really get to know the secret world of communicating.
  oh by the way i loved the title and the whole dictionary thing bob talked about. it was the eprfect metaphore. kudos for bob=]

  Author's response

  This chapter was Bob's moment of glory lol. Like you know what Frankie and Mikey think of the situation but Bob was quiet except for that time when he didn't think they should get married but even though he wasn't really a fan he stuck by them...Bob is good.
  
  As for how you said how There were more incidents of Billy vs.G,you gotta keep in mind there's a lot you don't know about since it her pov and she can't know it all but one way or another every loose end will be clarified.

• you can keep my brother

  (#) cutegirl12356 2008-01-12

  MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much! At least I didn't leave another cliffhanger ending! I know how you guys like these! lol!..It was tempting though....Really tempting...

• you can keep my brother

  (#) winnie_55 2008-01-14

  Yippee, it was Gerard! And they actually talked properly. Well, as properly as they ever get anyway! Gerard was so sweet to Sky, telling her she looked pretty and stuff, it was so romantic. Well. It would have been romantic if she hadn't accused him of being married to someone else! lol.Thank god for Bob! He's so lovely! Someone needed to tell Sky straight all the stuff that she thought was crap and that Gerard loves her. Yay.
  I'm glad Gerard is back sober and clean, it's so cool that he went through all that on his own just so they didn't have to get divorced. I really hope they work it out before Gerard pulverises Billy! Billy does irritate me from time to time, but I do kinda have a soft spot for him!

  Author's response

  I know! It's kinda like there's hope they'll make up and then Skyler goes off being Skyler-ish.

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