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Better Man
4 reviewsA songfic set in the Sonic X universe. A few years after Episode 78, the characters meet again. Primarily Sonic/Amy, with minor references to other pairings.
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Better Man
(#) JesusKetchum31 2006-01-27
I love the premise, and the characterization is very interesting. however, I have to take issue with your narrative style. You "tell" us a lot of things, but "show" very little. Try explaining less and describing a little more.
Author\'s Response: Yeah, I don't claim that this is my best work. Songfics just don't seem to be my forte. I actually only wrote this fanfic for a contest on the Sonic Zone Forums. The theme was music, which left a songfic as the only option I could think of. Still, your review was most appreciated.
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