All that mattered to him was that he could say goodbye. Death didn't scare him...but dying alone did. Hospital one-shot. Frerard!
(#) GerardWayisSex 2008-01-15 06:31:22 PMWow. That...so sad, man. I love how you didn't make it all cheery at the end. A nice twist.
And I have to say...Evanston?! Dude! I live RIGHT near there! Just north, actually! Rock, man. Nice choice. :D
Author's responseThanks! :) I've read a lot of stories where one of them are in the hospital and the other one thinks they're gonna die, then they miraculously get better and they live happily ever after. There's nothing wrong with that, in fact I love those stories, I just think they're a bit cliche and predictable, so I made my own where that doesn't happen. I'm glad you like it! :D
Lol, Evanston was completely random! I found it on a map and decided it sounded cool! :)
Thanks again for your review!!!
(#) x_Charlie_x 2008-01-16 12:38:00 PMFuck.
Sorry for the swearage but man, that was intense.
Probably made worse from the dream I had last night about my best friend dying in hospital.. but yeah...
really moving, well done =)
Author's response:/ I hate having dreams about people dying.
Thank you! :) It really means a lot to me that you liked it!
(#) crystalcrash 2008-01-17 02:09:58 AMAww. That was so sad! At the end i was all "hold on a second more, Frankie!"
Author's responseLol, thanks! :) Wouldn't that just be so sad? :( If someone knew they were going to die and that their lover was gonna come through the door to say goodbye to them, but they died a few seconds too soon? :[
Thank you for your review!!!
(#) frankxgerard 2008-03-19 01:05:24 AMGod I love this.
It really freakin makes my heart hurt to think about, and that's awesome.
(and go me, I reviewed twice, here and on lj, so I deserve a cookie, lol)
I suck at oneshots, so I am officially jealous.
Author's responseAw, thanks!
HeRe'S yOuR cOoKiE!!!!1 gives cookie
You shouldn't be jealous, you don't suck at one shots! I suck at any kind of writing at all :P
- oh my god, dat was so sad!!!! i actually think im crying!!! it was really good!
Author's responseAw, thank you! It really means a lot to me when people tell me that my writing has made them cry or nearly cry, it means that I must be doing something right! ^_^