After the death of Sirius, and learning the contents of the prophecy, Harry gets the opportunity to get away for a while. Independent Harry. H/LL, H/SB, but more friendship than romance.
(#) marcelhm 2008-04-28 02:03:27 PM
well hello, just found out you where writing a new story here and again a H/L no less so had to read it, and I can honestly say I was not disappointed, keep up the great work (and let harry get some peace with his girls lol ^^)
(#) ilchianti 2008-04-28 04:05:53 PM
I have to say I definitely enjoyed it, but I can't help wishing this story would outlast the summer. It was great.
The next part will be about the fall.
Thanks for reviewing.
(#) EPJ_III 2008-05-07 09:18:57 PM
Great story are you going to post it on Fanfiction.net
I found this to be a very interesting story and very well told. (A few minor punctuation/etc. error, but nothing to really worry about.) All in all, I found the handling of the HPLL friendship magnificent. While the inclusion of SB in the mix will make for some tension, I believe it will all work out in the end. Harry has a tremendous capacity to love and and equal need to be loved. All in all quite excellent and I look forward to the next story in this tale.
When Firenze told Dumbledore that Harry had married a centaur, I was expecting Harry/Laurel centaur secks, or at least a titjob given how often you mentioned her enormous, perky tits. Please rectify this lack of smut in the sequel.
Sorry to disappoint you, but I'm about half done with the sequel, and there hasn't been any sex there, either.
(#) Gaelyn 2009-01-11 12:34:58 PM
Loved this story. I'm looking forward to the sequel...especially since this stopped so abruptly.
Keep up the great writing!
(#) bruceman 2009-01-25 10:35:17 PM
really like the story hope your up to doing the continuation soon . checking ff.net tosee if you switched websites
(#) Pulse_Puppy 2009-07-02 07:01:11 PM
I really wish there was more than what you have up, but as they say, patience is a virture... sorry if that is spelt wrong, I'm typing in the dark.
All the same, you are one of the 'better' fanfic artisits I have come across.
A very interesting (and well-written) fic; I look forward to seeing where you take this 'verse in the future. Hopefully, you'll finish the sequel soon so it can be posted.
(#) precipace 2009-12-30 05:32:33 PM
you gonna write the next one?
it's good, with alarmingly human interactions, so i'd rather you not give up on this series. you're one of the better h/l writers active, so it'd be a real loss to see you stop.