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Keuse

by Novocaine 5 Reviews

[She closes her eyes as the camera flashes. It won't do to be crying in her wedding pictures, after all.] Hermione and Padma. Femmeslash. Gift fic for Addictive Passion.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Angst - Characters: Hermione,Padma - Warnings: [X] - Published: 2008/01/23 - Updated: 2008/01/24 - 1795 words - Complete

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  • Keuse

    (#) Vanir 2008-01-24 03:28:56 AM

    Brilliant and horrible. Have you possibly read Das Man?

    About how people get in impossible positions because it "isn't done" to do what they want?

    Beautiful as always.

    Vanir

    Author's response

    Thank you! No, I haven't read that. Who wrote it? That is kind of what this is about... Proper, polite masochism. I don't know - I still don't really understand what I did with this. I have to give it some time and distance myself. Btw, I'm working on your Lavender request. I just didn't reply to your review so I can tell you when it's finished.
  • Keuse

    (#) Cateagle 2008-01-24 07:03:36 PM

    Hmm, if I'm properly interpretting what I'm reading, the title is from the Afrikaans word for "choice". Which fits this bittersweet story quite well.

    As a story idea, I wonder what Ron would do if he got "all" that Harry has that he envies, but had to pay the price Harry's paid?

    Author's response

    Yup, you're right. Afrikaan for "choice".
    Wow, that's a really interesting idea. Do you mean it like - present day events leave Ron carrying the weight? Or that they switch lives and Ron remembers before?
  • Keuse

    (#) Cateagle 2008-01-24 09:30:33 PM

    I was thinking present day events that leave Ron with the money and fame but at the same steep price that Harry paid, the loss of all those he loved. It could be through death or just because he let things go to his head and his prat-like ways drove them off (I could see this having that effect on Hermione if they were together).
  • Keuse

    (#) Nautilus 2008-01-24 11:56:03 PM

    that was beautiful

    Author's response

    Thank you! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it!
  • Keuse

    (#) Kath 2008-01-25 11:33:36 AM

    Brilliant !! Although it COULD have a happy end (I dunno, never read addictive passion). you think you could make it a 2 shot and bring Padma and Hermione together?

    and then, in the end, you'd say what the hell does the title means, ok?

    and could you gove the url to addictive passion (it's a fic, right?)

    cheers*

    Author's response

    Heh. Thanks. But I don't know about a second chapter - I never do happy endings. Seriously, unless it's a humor fic, none of my fics end happily.
    And, no, Addictive Passion isn't a fic - she's a writer/reviewer who requested this fic.
    The title has been guessed, so here is the meaning: "choice" in Afrikaan.

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