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new found love
(#) khunwantedxx 2008-01-25
please no more
its a stupid tennie story theres like no plot and its so predictable
for the sake of all that is good and holy dont write anymoreAuthor's response
Aw, please let me write some more!! We haven't even got up to the part where Gerard starts cutting and he gets reffered to hospital and Frank's all "how could you do this to me?" then Gerard's all "im so sorry frankie plz foregive meeee!!!1" and then Frank like "of corse i will gee i love you" and Gerard goes "i promise ill stop cuting i love you to"
I mean, it's not a true story without that, is it?!new found love
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-01-25
Amen to that. Seriously, tons of spelling errors, completely plotless, crappy writing style (no descriptions or imagery). This is supposed to be a writing community, okay? At least take some pride in your work and get a fucking beta. Disgusting.Author's response
Everyone's a critic!new found love
(#) frankxgerard 2008-01-25
I love this. Continue, please. =D
I'm so jealous. I wish I could write like you. D=Author's response
maybee 1 day u can wright as gud as mee!!111!!! thnx 4 da review!!!11!!!eleven!!!new found love
(#) TheMasteroftheWicket 2008-01-25
Wtf? Please, no more. There was absolutly no plot, and loads of spelling mistakes. What are you, eight? And if you are, why are you writing smut anyway, not only is is bad, it's pointless! No more please, and get some spelling lessons while you're at it! I know I sound harsh but god, that was Frerard Teenie Smut, and that's the worst kind of story!
-MirandaAuthor's response
Ooh, dude, harsh! :)new found love
(#) TheMasteroftheWicket 2008-01-25
Yup, you're officially a teenie! I read your profile and seriously threw up. Why do you type like that, that's fucking stupid! Not only are you bad at summaries, you're a horrible writer! You can't spell for shit, and I highly doubt that ANYONE in My Chemical Romance would say OMG, it's fucking retarted. Gerard Way is not your husband, shut the fuck up teenie. Oh, yah, My Chemical Romance is awesome... Like OmG You Fuckin teenie, you have the IQ of a pudding cup, If you only like MCR Because of Frank, Gerard, and Frerard, fuck you, go to hell!Author's response
Sarcastically Im GlAd yOu lYkE mY sToRiE!!!!11!!one!!!one-thousand, one hundred and eleven!!!!!
i already said i was bad at summaries. y did u read it if the summary was so bad?new found love
(#) frankxgerard 2008-01-26
That person is mean. Fuck them. I hope Gerard comes to their house and fucks their fuckin eyeballs out, fucking fuck. FUCK.
You're cool, don't let them get you down!!! Teenies make the world go round, dammit.Author's response
Lol!!! Thanks! :)
I'm glad you like my teenie-ness!!!!111!!!!one!!!new found love
(#) khunwantedxx 2008-01-26
teenies are fucking stupid aand they do not make the world go round and frankxxgerard
i actually like your stories but if yoyu gonna fucking act like a teenie then im not reading em anymoreAuthor's response
Shit, she was joking! O__O fxg is not a teenie!!!
And besides, you should like her stories for what they are, not because she joked one time about teenies.
FUCK!new found love
(#) Disenchanted 2008-01-26
I think frankxgerard and fr3r4rd15ho7 are thesame person. I think frankxgerard just wanted to see how people would react to a teenie on ficwad. Or maybe I have an over active imagination. But look, fr3r4rd15hot can obviously talk like a regular person:
"Shit, she was joking! O__O fxg is not a teenie!!!
And besides, you should like her stories for what they are, not because she joked one time about teenies.
FUCK!"
Why the fuck did you write something so crappy if you knew how to talk normally?Author's response
Nah, it's not her. i can use real english when i want to, like if i'm really serious about something and i actualy think about it but when i wrote this i didn't feel like it. fxg is a cool person and i think that every one should read her storys and it got me angry when some one said that they were gunna stop reading her storys or some thing
I promise you we are not the same personnew found love
(#) TheMasteroftheWicket 2008-01-27
Now that I think about it, Disenchanted is probably right. FrankxGerard you hope Gerard does what to me!!! That's, ew. And the author of his bull shit story should stop talking like a fucking teenie if she can talk like a real person!Author's response
omg
I didnt want to talk properly. i was tired, hyper and bored. i couldnt be bothered spell checking or any thingnew found love
(#) frankxgerard 2008-01-27
Jesus fuck, this is getting seriously out of hand, I was joking. I'm sorry TheMasteroftheWicket, and I don't see any of the other teeny stories on here getting as bad reviews as this one. At least this doesn't have way too much cutting and alcohol, or whatever the fuck people seem to have gotten in their minds that they should write stories about Gerard doing, when life has gone beyons that. Teenies do not make the world go round, but they don't offset it too bad either. It's the people who flame people for writing what they want who do, and no one ever said that everything on this site is going to be written by a college professor. I wouldn't be so harsh, because I bet I could find plenty of mistakes in some of the people's fics who critisize this one.Author's response
thank you!!!
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