Naruto trains and snaps at two members of his team.
(#) HakuRules1424 2008-01-30 03:42:19 PMHey....Ok the idea of Naruto's bloodline is very cool!!! Umm pairing is Deff. Tayuya i cant stand Kin. Ne way..huh my favorite charactor as u might have guessed is Haku...and i would guess u either have some sympothy for him as well or u just havent gotten to killing him yet but if u can...plz spare him! well thats all i have to say o and the body armor sounds cool...accept i would give him a different long range weapon...maybe a ball and chain idk. thanks cya
- Pairing wise, I have trouble seeing it considering they both work for Snake face, and thats just horrible surival rate considering the man treats his followers like cannon fodder and living sacrafices. Drawing the attention of the man is not in Naruto's best interest, and the girls really don't bring much to the table.
Chapter wise I liked what happend for the most part, if Naruto's words gets to Kakashi he might get better training. On the other hand it was a rather risky thing to do. Over all I really hope Naruto keeps a lot of his abilities a secret, ninja's live and die by thier secrets and I see no reason why he should have to tell a village who hates and tries to kill him all of his. Not to mention the fact even if he trusted the Third hokage the towns secruity has been proven pathetic and you can bet Naruto's blood line information be in enemy hands before nightfall if he tells any one.