(#) falloutgirl 2008-02-01Ooh, I liked this one. =D The helplessness and self-pity of someone so deeply in love, unable to stop himself... You expressed it all brilliantly.
Perhaps a little more insight into their relationship, a few situations, incidents, metaphors and maybe some jealousy? =P
But even without all that, it was lovely!
(#) falloutboynumber1fan 2008-03-21Its with Pete right? OOO I hope it is. That was really great, if I ever got a letter like that I would problably cry my eyes out in a good way then run to is house and knock on the door and if he answers jump into his arms
Author's responseYeah its soppose to be for Pete. And YAY thank you for the review. Glad that you liked it.
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