Fuu and Mugen tussle in the street.
Very nice! ^_^ I liked it
(#) Sutashii 2006-04-23 07:29:17 PM
Very Cute! I love how he just laughs at her! I can soo see him just doing that. Great job can't wait for more
(#) Marj 2006-04-25 01:11:05 AM
That was so, so cruel of you to stop right there! This is really cute. Want more!
(#) InuKag 2006-05-17 04:10:22 PM
you should romantically link them here... that would be sexy. I like this.
(#) InuKag 2006-05-17 04:13:39 PM
oh plus... i need to say that the characterization of mugen is excellent. hehe But yeah, this would be a perfect time to incorporate something happening between them.
(#) shikonjewel 2007-05-14 10:11:39 AM
wow!! i loved it! keep going! ;)
Lmao! That was hilarious. I can actually picture those two characters doing something like that. Those two chapters were cute beyond words. You should finish this story. lol. Keep up the great work! Ato!
(#) axelflames 2011-07-20 10:15:13 PM
You have me on pins and needles! I have to have more! PLEASE.......