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• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Infin1x 2008-02-11

  Very nicely done. Even though it would make a very short story it would be very interesting to have Harry continue to things with Luna and her father and it destroys Voldie without Harry even going back to England and when he does get back for the start of school he wonders why everyone is so happy.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) michaeljohn 2008-02-11

  Interesting condition with the light magic affecting the dark. What a pity Harry does not know the effect he is having. Please continue soon with this.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) rainbow2007 2008-02-11

  i love it. it interesting how luna is the one to go to harry. .please update soon.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Wolfric 2008-02-11

  Good chapter. I like Harry and the Sun sticking it to Voldemort, with any luck the connection is permanantly destroyed. Thanks for writing. W.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) snowman 2008-02-11

  Great story so far.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Immortal7 2008-02-11

  Interesting chapter. I love how you kept Luna the same as she was in the book. As much as i can see it possible the whole facade Loony just seems to cheapen the character. I wonder how long until everyone realizes that Harry is missing. Can't wait for the next chapter later

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-02-12

  Very interesting update. I like the progression between Harry and Luna, and I'm also enjoying the unusual uses of Harry's connection to Voldemort you've come up with.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-02-12

  Very good, and the relationship between Luna and Harry is growing slowly but surely, and a lot of things to wonder about here. Will be interesting to see what else comes of this vision Harry had, what else will be waiting for them in the forest, and whether Tom will go aftger them, and also nice to see a Bella who has a bit of humanity, rather than the single-minded insane killer that she's usually portrayed as.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) DrT 2008-02-12

  I echo the other comments; a well-thought out series of events. I hope we hear more about the exodus
  
  "T"

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Treck 2008-02-12

  Damn your good.
  
  Cookies for your muse.

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