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Ship Of Fools: The Avatar Cycle, Book 1: Water
(#) boenwell 2006-04-25
Hello!
I have to say I really like your character Dr. Hua. A character after my own heart =^^=.
The characters sound mostly in character, and the developing relationship between Zuko and Katara is interesting. I like how you described how Zuko felt when he was dancing with Katara.
That just... It fits.
I guess that's it. Didn't really see anything wrong with the story, but I like it a lot.Ship Of Fools: The Avatar Cycle, Book 1: Water
(#) me-obviously 2006-04-29
Whoa. This is very good. I positively love your characterizations. And Dr. Hua is like a Fire Nation version of Dr. House. Update soon.Ship Of Fools: The Avatar Cycle, Book 1: Water
(#) sugarland31 2006-07-07
Hey! I probably should have reviewed the rest of the chapters, too, but I just registered on here, so I couldn't actually review when I was reading them, if that makes sense. But anyway, the entire story was FREAKING AWESOME. Everyone was completely in character, which was extremely refreshing to read. By any chance, are you planning on writing a sequel? It'd be awesome to read what happens after they leave the ship.
Just a thought. But it was an amazing story, even if you don't continue further.Ship Of Fools: The Avatar Cycle, Book 1: Water
(#) cate 2006-12-13
Hey.. why don't you continue.. this path.. to the story.. more chapters? :)) besause this all on ship was realy good...Ship Of Fools: The Avatar Cycle, Book 1: Water
(#) Hanjeu 2008-05-22
Wow. The character interaction...everything was just plainly awesome. You'll continue this, will you?Ship Of Fools: The Avatar Cycle, Book 1: Water
(#) Sleepy_Stingray 2020-04-10
Woah... It's been 14 years... If by any chance you actually see this comment, you should definitely update! It's such a good story!Ship Of Fools: The Avatar Cycle, Book 1: Water
(#) Pepperflake39 2023-06-05
It's been so much fun reading this series of stories! I really enjoyed it!Ship Of Fools: The Avatar Cycle, Book 1: Water
(#) sushigal007 2023-06-07
I know it's deeply unlikely that there's going to be an update after 17 years, so all I will say is thank you, I had a lovely few days reading this.Ship Of Fools: The Avatar Cycle, Book 1: Water
(#) 3crocodilefrogs 2023-06-25
Argh I love this! your characterisations are super interesting and your original characters are really fleshed out. Plus your writer's voice is fantastic and really lends itself well to Katara! I hope you do get the chance to see this and know that your writing brought a lot of people joy for a very long time!
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