- cool, but i don't see why lily would marry james if he was peggers from sirius... but whatever, it a fanfic and u can make stuff up as you go...
Author's responseHer and James were already engaged at the time. She loved James but she loved Sirius as well. She figured that she had better hurry up and marry James since she was preggers.
(#) iamspammer 2008-02-15Nice story.
But same questions as "Nautilus". If she were pregnant then why marry James? if she were pregnant AFTER marriage that's another story.
But like I said, interesting story. Now, if Lucius believes Sirius then he should take Sirius out of Azkaban too. That will make it more interesting and Harry will have his father. Otherwise knowing Sirius is innocent and still leaving him in prison is a BIG hole in story. Besides it's Lucius. He knows Fudge. He can convince him that he'll be more popular if helps bringing an INNOCENT out.
Just MY thoughts.
Please update soon.
Author's responseSirius was given the Dementor's kiss when he was captured. That is why his will was read.
- Since it started with a WILL reading I am assuming that Sirius died in Azkaban and wasn't just imprisioned. I also wonder did Sirius leave all of his well everything to others? or was something left for Harry (besides the obvious Potter inheritance) that was rather unclear. Also exactly how old is Harry suppose to be here (you had him in a days old diaper)
I like the way the story is going a loving family for Harry is just what is needed. You need to watch your tenses and pronouns... When you were describing what Petunia was taking from the cupboard you called Harry and it ... sinceit was from Narcissa pov... she wouldn't have done that.
keep up the good work I can't wait to see more. I've added you to my favorites.
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