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by Gai 1 Reviews

Earth is threatened by an unstoppable force, and it's only hope is a man who lives in his own world.

Category: Sci-Fi - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Sci-fi - Characters:  - Published: 2006/01/09 - Updated: 2006/01/10 - 1302 words

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  • Hell on Earth

    (#) armourdude 2006-03-26 03:37:20 PM

    The concept is not a new one. This chapter was way long on unnessasary discription. The discription was good but was used for a set up that was too long in my opinion. Then in the end the Man sounded as if was unsure of is mission to begin with. Only to finaly know that he had been right. This seems like something you would go do and not be unsure of.



    Author\'s Response: Admittedly, most people would be sure that a man's a murderous monster before they killed him. But as you can probably tell, the character isn't of sound mind.And I haven't even revealed the concept, so it's a little early to say that this idea has been done before.And my life's a set up that's too long....I...I have no life.

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