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Lessons
16 ReviewsHarry's in the woods, and Dumbledore reveals some of his plans to McGonagall.
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Summer of Contracts
(#) Vanir 2008-02-26 10:20:18 AM
Thank you.
This is a very interesting story, and i'm even more intrigued now, knowing a part of the Fumbledore Master Plan. Why doesn't anyone ever make an apprentice plan? Nevermind. Your Luna is incredibly loveable, and her father is a great character.
More power to your keyboard!
Vanir -
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(#) Wolfric 2008-02-26 10:21:13 AM
I continue to enjoy your fine story. Your concept of occulmancy is interesting. Thanks for writing. W. -
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(#) mathiasgranger 2008-02-26 10:25:30 AM
Good grief, this is even more demented than Dumbledore was in canon....
Maybe McGonagall can transfigure Dumbledore a new brain?
~Matt -
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(#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-02-26 10:43:12 AM
Funny guy, that Dumbledore. Funny like a Nazi with Bill Gates' monetary resources.
I like the integrity that Harry showed in this chapter. Looking forward to more. -
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(#) twilliams1797 2008-02-26 02:08:11 PM
just goes to prove that the powers in the wizarding world are ****idiots.
Nice interaction with Mr L and Luna. -
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(#) Nautilus 2008-02-26 03:21:47 PM
great work, and nice to see a little development with harry and luna... the snortwart things were great... though a description would be nice...
i thought this was a harry/luna and possibily susan story??? though i don't really mind daphne...
is mcGonagall going to interfere with dumbles plans? she better, it knowledge comes power, and with power responsibility.
and i can't wait to see harry lose it regarding others choosing his wife? -
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(#) Wonderbee31 2008-02-26 04:58:19 PM
Nice moment with Mr. Lovegood and Harry here, that was an interesting chat they had, and it's good to see Harry actually getting a bit of a Father figure in his life. After that, the talk with Luna was well done, and I really enjoyed the way that Harry was able to take her off guard a bit. Dumbledore, the man is just about as mean and nasty as can be imo, and honestly wish that Minerva would slap the living ** out of him. I do hope that his plans backfire on him badly, though it's nice of Minerva to think that Harry likes Hermione. Can't wait for the next part. -
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(#) DrT 2008-02-26 05:25:08 PM
Oh dear, Harry had best hurry up and love Luna good to avoid Dumbles' plan.
Your Luna is wonderful, btw
"T" -
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(#) Clell65619 2008-02-27 01:43:55 PM
- Loved the conversation with the elder Lovegood. A very pointed bird and the bees.
- "Daddy wouldn't chop you up" Perfect. It was nice to see someone disconcert Luna, just this once. And Harry got to see a snorkack.
- Please tell me you plan on having Dumbles beaten to death? Please? -
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(#) iamspammer 2008-02-27 02:16:47 PM
- I was quite sure that even if they were wizards, they'd have contraceptive potions and charms. I mean, why not take this and even if something goes beyond the line, say, they'll be protected?
- I do want to see how Harry plans to thawrt all Dumble's plans.