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• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Vanir 2008-02-26

  Thank you.
  This is a very interesting story, and i'm even more intrigued now, knowing a part of the Fumbledore Master Plan. Why doesn't anyone ever make an apprentice plan? Nevermind. Your Luna is incredibly loveable, and her father is a great character.
  More power to your keyboard!
  
  Vanir

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Wolfric 2008-02-26

  I continue to enjoy your fine story. Your concept of occulmancy is interesting. Thanks for writing. W.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) mathiasgranger 2008-02-26

  Good grief, this is even more demented than Dumbledore was in canon....
  
  Maybe McGonagall can transfigure Dumbledore a new brain?
  
  ~Matt

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-02-26

  Funny guy, that Dumbledore. Funny like a Nazi with Bill Gates' monetary resources.
  
  I like the integrity that Harry showed in this chapter. Looking forward to more.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) twilliams1797 2008-02-26

  just goes to prove that the powers in the wizarding world are ****idiots.
  Nice interaction with Mr L and Luna.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Nautilus 2008-02-26

  great work, and nice to see a little development with harry and luna... the snortwart things were great... though a description would be nice...
  
  i thought this was a harry/luna and possibily susan story??? though i don't really mind daphne...
  
  is mcGonagall going to interfere with dumbles plans? she better, it knowledge comes power, and with power responsibility.
  
  and i can't wait to see harry lose it regarding others choosing his wife?

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-02-26

  Nice moment with Mr. Lovegood and Harry here, that was an interesting chat they had, and it's good to see Harry actually getting a bit of a Father figure in his life. After that, the talk with Luna was well done, and I really enjoyed the way that Harry was able to take her off guard a bit. Dumbledore, the man is just about as mean and nasty as can be imo, and honestly wish that Minerva would slap the living ** out of him. I do hope that his plans backfire on him badly, though it's nice of Minerva to think that Harry likes Hermione. Can't wait for the next part.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) DrT 2008-02-26

  Oh dear, Harry had best hurry up and love Luna good to avoid Dumbles' plan.
  
  Your Luna is wonderful, btw
  
  "T"

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Clell65619 2008-02-27

  - Loved the conversation with the elder Lovegood. A very pointed bird and the bees.
  
  - "Daddy wouldn't chop you up" Perfect. It was nice to see someone disconcert Luna, just this once. And Harry got to see a snorkack.
  
  - Please tell me you plan on having Dumbles beaten to death? Please?

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) iamspammer 2008-02-27

  - I was quite sure that even if they were wizards, they'd have contraceptive potions and charms. I mean, why not take this and even if something goes beyond the line, say, they'll be protected?
  
  - I do want to see how Harry plans to thawrt all Dumble's plans.
  

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