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3 ReviewsWIP AU Harry was sent to Azkaban and was later found to be innocent. With the help of Ron, he will find out who his true friends are. Will he forgive those who betrayed him? Will he be able to le...
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Flames of Betrayal
(#) Ashley 2005-06-03 11:06:15 PM
Well, I was a bit off on the Secret-Keeper, but I didn't know about house elves being able to do that. Works for me either way. I'm glad Hagrid is still loyal to Harry. And I'm happy Hedwig is ok. So many betrayal fics have her killed. I hate that. Anyways, I about died laughing reading that letter from Ron. I love him. lol. WOW!! You've taken Manipulative!Dumbledore to a whole new level. Congrats! As far as I know, you're the fist to have done it. I wish Sirius was in this, but that's ok. Still got good ol' Ron, after all!! Can't wait to see if anyone else is still on Harry's side. Byez for now!! -
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(#) DrT 2008-07-26 09:05:04 AM
I thought you said Hermione killed Hedwig in an earlier chapter?
Since I didn't review the earlier chapters,I should say I find it unlikely that Hermione would have had that violent a reaction of doubting Harry unprompted, as she (and Luna to some extent) was the only student close to Harry who never doubted him before. Granted, I can see her betraying Harry like this if she was properly set up, but you haven't provided such a set-up yet (and why would she have even gone to visit the Weasleys after leaving Hogwarts? just to abuse Ron?) -
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(#) HallowsNotHorcruxes 2010-03-26 03:07:18 PM
Love Ron's letter to Dumbles. I also really like how Snape respects Ron & Harry. It's so odd when you think of how Snape used to treat them, but I suppose in these cicumstances, an uneasy friendship could form. Looking forward to reading the rest.