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• Summer of Contracts

  (#) lycus 2008-03-10

  Damn that was exciting and sad, I am really enjoying this story and loved the quick update, and it's sad that susan has lost her aunt and I hope that she makes it to safety, and I really wanted amelia to live so that susan would have more time to make her choise and harry could end up with hermione and luna as his wives but whose to say that he cant have three. this was a great chapter and I hope for another quick update.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) michaeljohn 2008-03-10

  Another excellent chapter. I think I see where you are going with this, but you have surprised me before. Please continue.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-03-10

  Oh man, I was hoping that Amelia would survive here. Glad to see how the attack might have went, and really exciting, unlike the canon version. Interesting part with Molly here, and Dumbledore is making plans about Harry without his knowledge, and Gran Longbottom looks to be planning as well. Should be interesting to see how things go for Harry, who he might end up married to, and what this will mean for the growing relationship with Luna.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) DrT 2008-03-10

  Wow, lots of twists and turns here. It should be fun watching them play out
  
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• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Nautilus 2008-03-10

  why does Amelia get killed by voldy is all of these fics... she is a strong character and would really be fun to write, not to mention an important resource for harry and susan....
  
  i guess this gives an opening for harry susan and also builds a stronger susan, but still all of this could be done with amelia still alive...
  
  the rest was good, harry's meditation seems to be doing nothing for his mental connection with moldy...
  
  molly seems to be a greedy little bitch.. about time she gets hers... looking forward to it...

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) PerfesserN 2008-03-10

  Excellent battle scene, nice explosive twist at the end. Sorry to lose Amelia (again), she's a tough bird.
  So I'm guessing Susan and Luna for the ladies Black and Potter?

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Traveller 2008-03-10

  Copenhagen is the Dutch Capital? Oh dear, that´s an F for Geography right there. I live about 30 km from the Dutch capital, but at least a few hundred from Copenhagen, that should say enough.
  Good Chapter for the rest though.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) sweetgirl 2008-03-10

  Lovely chapter. Hate that Amelia had to die. She could have been a valuable resource for Harry. I am starting to see how the contract will shape. I am looking foward to a possible Harry/Luna/Susan. As long as there is no Ginny I will be happy. The Weasly's are something. They can ask Ginny about her feelings, but have not talk to Harry about this. Just blindly following Harry. If they had any sense, then they would suspect something was up since Harry has never mentioned Ginny or marriage in any of his letters. That should have tip them off that he might not know about it.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) selenepotter 2008-03-10

  Copenhagen is the Danish capital and is on and island in the baltic see. No where near the northern part of Sweden.
  
  but great chapter anyway!
  
  I like Susan and Luna as choices!

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Immortal7 2008-03-10

  It was sad to see Amelia die. I was hoping she would live this time. I wonder how Harry is going to take it now that the vision was real. I am hoping for a Harry/Luna/Hermione just because I love this pairing, but Susan isn't a bad pick ether. Or maybe a Harry/Luna/Hermione/Susan fic. I mean you all ready showed that Ron doesn't like hermione kind of. Which is always a big plus in my book because that is one of the few pairing in the series i can't stand. But anyway love the story so far andwas wondereing if you were going to put it on fanfiction.net as well. until next time later.

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