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Another chapter. yaY.
Bryan: Oh yay.
(Lei calls the recruits in)
Lei: MTV has donated $500,000 to the military in exchange for having some specific people enlisted whose daily lives could be filmed.
Bryan: What the fu-
Lei: This is Xiayou, boy-crazy teenage girl with lots of friends!
Xiayou: Hi, everyone! (Waves at the camera)
Lei: Next is Jin, loner and generally quiet kid who hates his father!
Jin: I just...I just want to be left alone for a while if that's okay...
Lei: Then we have bad boy Hwoarang!
Hwoarang: Nobody understands me.
Lei: And finally is A+ student Julia Chang!
Julia: Hey, everyone, I hope we can all have lots of fun working together!
Announcer with a fake Hawaiian surfer accent: And now back to The Real Army!
Julia: (to camera) We've all been trying to get along, but Bryan's really been finding it hard to adjust to having friends.
Xiayou: I think Allan really liked me, he asked me out for another date!
Bryan: He only likes you cause you walk around in that slutty schoolgirl outfit.
(Xiayou runs off crying)
Julia: (to camera) I think it's because he's not used to friendship, you know, we just have to show that we care about him.
Jin: (to camera) I mean, well, you know, it's just...yeah...
Julia: Everyone, I know we don't want to enforce rules, but someone's been leaving their juice on the table without a coaster. Now I know it's not Bryan, because he only drinks beer.
(Bryan drinks some of his hard liquor)
Julia: But we made these rules feeling that we'd all try out best to follow them.
Hwoarang: I don't follow the rules, I break them!(crosses arms menacingly)
Xiayou: (to camera) I like Hwoarang, I mean he's really cute since he's a boy, but he's been trying to cause all kinds of problems, like when he leaves the sink on, I mean, how hard is it to turn the sink off?
Jin: (to camera) Yeah....I always make my bed, but he messed it up once. I decided to ask him about it, but than he just did it again.
Bryan: (to camera) ...the kid's an asshole.
Hwoarang: (to camera) They just don't want to take the time to understand me, man.
Julia: (to camera) It's really been hard trying to study though whenever Bryan and Hwoarang are fighting. They basically stand in front of each other waving their arms around, while making a bunch of threats, and neither and they never actually do anything.
Bryan: (to camera) Yeah...it started during that tag tournament they held a while back. He and I got stuck on the same team, and he said something to me that pissed me off, so I shot something back, and we just started arguing for a while. I think the only reason neither of us tried to kick the shit out of each other was because we were on the same team, and I guess that kind of stuck.
Hwoarang: (to camera) Yeah, I mean, it's like arguing with Bryan's the only thing that I really enjoy. I tried arguing with Jin, but, the guy's just...well, you know.
Jin: (to camera) Yeah, when Hwoarang's yelling at me, I just close my eyes and try to imagine myself in my happy place...with mommy...
Xiayou: (to camera) ........I like boys!
Bryan: (to camera) ...
(camera stays on Bryan)
Bryan: (to camera) Leave me the censored alone.
End Of Chapter 5
I got the arguing bit from Bryan and Hwoarang's Tag intro, in case you couldn't tell. I made it pretty obvious, though you might not have seen it. I tried to give the characters the feel of modern teenagers like in the Real World, though I wouldn't know personally, since I never watched the show. And I'm not a teenager myself, but a 42 year-old man who writes fanfics in his basement naked.