Post-Doom. Alister is found beaten nearly to death after an argument with Valon, and Valon blames himself. Spoilers for Doom Arc, friendship stuff.
- Yay! I remember this story, and I think you've done really well in writing it. *nods* The characterizations are good from what I know of the Bikers, and I like the atmosphere of the story too. ^-^
Another reason I like it is cos' in a few of your earlier works, I noticed that your sentances were really simple, without using clauses etc. ^^ Its much better here.
Can't find any crits, sorry!! XD