Categories > Books > Harry Potter > Harry Potter and the Chronicles of Time: Part II

Chapter One: Old Ties and New Beginning

by SoccerDevil22 3 Reviews

On January 23, 1997, Harry Potter was killed in battle. However, for Harry, death was only the beginning. He was given the chance to change his past and undo the dark and desolate future created by...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters: Ginny,Harry,Hermione,Luna,Neville,Ron - Warnings: [!!!] [V] [?] - Published: 2008/04/09 - Updated: 2008/04/09 - 4334 words

Reviews

  • Harry Potter and the Chronicles of Time: Part II

    (#) AnnF 2008-04-15 09:00:28 AM

    Typos "You keep to much bottle inside you" too bottled up, & of

    scare should be scare.

    me mum should be my mum for Harry.

    It really sounds like you are writing Seamus not Harry near the end of the chapter.


  • Harry Potter and the Chronicles of Time: Part II

    (#) GryffindorDragon 2008-04-15 09:19:37 AM

    That must be a wizarding bulletin board. First, "In the upper left corner were four pictures", but soon there are fifth, sixth, seventh, and the last (8 total). So the pictures must magically multiply on the bulletin board?
    Nice start to first year!
  • Harry Potter and the Chronicles of Time: Part II

    (#) pstibbons 2008-08-23 09:52:15 PM

    I suppose it will be a perfectly competent fic, but you're shipping Harry wrong if you're SIYE-compatible. You are a total fool and a Jo sycophant. You don't deserve to write, you tasteless imbecile.

    Author's response

    Alright. The gloves are off.

    You listen here and you listen good. Unitl you write a god damn fic of your own, you void all rights to critise others.

    If you don't like my story, stop reading it you shit head. In other words: FUCK YOU!

    'Sincerely',

    ~Jeff~

Log in!




Register Lost password

Filter

You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0

 

Featured Story

Site Stats

  • Authors: 667670
  • Stories: 39962

Recent Stories