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Two Overanalyzed Figure Chapter I

A fifteen year old naive impressionable girl falls in love with thirty five year old physchopath, Elijah, who asks her to do the worst thing imaginable: kill her two best friends for the good of th...

Category: Drama - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2008/04/15 - Updated: 2008/04/16 - 4297 words

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• Two Overanalyzed Figure Chapter I

  (#) xl0nelywriterx 2008-04-18 06:44:45 PM

  A very interesting story, there's not too many bi-romance stories out there. It is a very fast-paced piece for Chapter I, I feel it should be more gradual. I did enjoy it, but I feel that it should be a little slower, and not trying to cram in a lot with a little. I'll deff. be reading more. I especially like the main character, she's very dynamic. I like how her name isn't revealed, she's very mysterious. I will be reading more for sure! :D

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