(#) baublehead66 2008-04-21I think this could be really good story if it grows past what it is right now.
Something big needs to happen; like Frank dying and/or Peyton realizing she's in love with Mikey but Mikey falls for Suicide Alicia (which is where it might be going with him, right?) and Peyton has to win him back.
Or make Peyton less of a blundering, weak girl. Cuz there aren't a lot of strong(er) female characters in fanfiction.
Author's responseI kind of have writers block, so what I've been writing isnt that great. I will be brainstorming more.
Your ideas were great, but like i said im still thinking.
I don't want to ruin any of the story, but I really dont think I'm killing Frank, any time soon atleast
(#) astro_zombiies 2008-04-21I definitely think you should continue! I got like all into this and if Frank dies, I think I might actually cry. Haha. I don't agree with baublehead66 I think Mikey should get with Alicia and all just because of her name, but other than that it's up to you, your story, but please continue.
- GO GO GO GO GOO!!!!!!!! hell ya u should ttly keep goin!!!!!! i swear i really did start to cry when i thought u were gonna type `frankie was dead` then i felt stupid when it didnt... but yea i hav 2 agree wif baublehead66 even tho i dont lik the idea of frankie dying if it does happen i promiss i shall keep on reading because this story is very captating!
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