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• The Shimmering Mermaid

  (#) Nynaeve 2008-04-28

  hole'fuck!
  
  you are puttin ALL in this story.
  i wait with trepidation for the next.

• The Shimmering Mermaid

  (#) canath 2008-04-28

  I liked the discriptions of all the girls and their opinion of harry. The dildo named harry was a good touch. I cant wait for the next chapter keep up the good work.

• The Shimmering Mermaid

  (#) DtH4ever 2008-04-28

  it may have taken ages (or a week :-P), but i think the deal: time chapter was more than well worth it.
  
  PS: where do i get this holographic device?!? g

• The Shimmering Mermaid

  (#) ARJAN 2008-04-28

  Fan-fucking-tastic! Great chapter! I can't wait to see what you have planned for Lily :)

• The Shimmering Mermaid

  (#) red_jacobson 2008-04-28

  I liked the idea of the Harem; but; sorry; the idea of Lily being resurrected to be a fuck toy for Harry just skeeves me out completely.
  
  I will follow the next chapters; but, forgive me if I skip the Lily stuff
  
  red

  Author's response

  I respect that; HarryLily is a particular brand of HPSmut and its not for everyone. Fair enough

• The Shimmering Mermaid

  (#) Cateagle 2008-04-28

  'Tis a most hot chapter with lots of action, and then there's the discussion of the different witches. I thought the bits about Susan and Hannah were nice touches, indeed. It'll be quite interesting to see how/if they manage to bring back Lily and where she ends up in relation to them. Meanwhile, now that Raven's been taken both front and rear, I wonder how long it's going to take her to ask Harry to do that double-phallus number and fill both at once? And how long after that before both Fleur and Gabrielle request the same treatment?

  Author's response

  I got that idea from madcow on AFF, that's the first place I saw the old 'grow a second penis' thing

• The Shimmering Mermaid

  (#) jabarber69 2008-04-28

  Hey great chapter, love the revelations from his mum, and oh yeah where can I go to get that piece of an incubus so I can get and maintain erectins and all the semem you want, I want that Santa...!

• The Shimmering Mermaid

  (#) spedclass 2008-04-29

  Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

• The Shimmering Mermaid

  (#) bob999999999 2008-05-01

  I can't see the chapter, is it just my computer or is something up?

  Author's response

  Try reloading the page, as well as logging out and logging in again. Ficwad tends to shit itself every once in a while

• The Shimmering Mermaid

  (#) iamleath 2008-05-04

  Great chapter keep updating please

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