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(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-05-03 04:31:56 AMwow!
that was a great chapter! i really like how they spar off each other!
they are going to struggle to resist each other!!
so is Egan still a virgin?? and if so i bet gerard doesn't know that??!!
great writing again. thanks very much!
Author's responseThank you. Yes, there is some struggling ahead.
Egan is, Gerard definitely isn't, but he knows she is. He figured it out after she told him she was saving herself.
(#) linerlover 2008-05-03 09:25:23 AMi gotta say, it doesnt seem like youre having any trouble at all writing the physical scene.
amazing story, as usual, and really really amazing interactions and developments of characters and stories.
i love it soooooooo much. more soon?
Author's responseOh thank God. I was so worried writing that, I was thinking 'They are gona see right through this and hate you'. But you didn't, so yay!
- this chapter was once again amazing! i dont know what im going to do when you actually write a bad chapter. it is going to have to happen sometime and when it does i might just go into shock.
i think its funny how calmly they talk about marriage and having a baby. at this rate the proposal will be very anticlimatic. if there is a proposal... their relationship is kind of confusing but i think that is why i love this story so much. it is just like a real relationship.
bring on the family! i cant wait for egan to meet all the family and band members.
Author's responseYou say 'when', I say 'have'. But you all seem to stick with me through the not so great chapters. Thank you so much.
Yeah, that is a downside. Shold she say yes, it's not going to be like the night he told her he loved her. It'll just be like, Okay, whatevs. Let's go out to eat tonight, I don't feel like cooking.