The same day he almost loses his life, she tries to end hers. Is it some weird fate that they should wind up in the same hospital?
(#) RyanRossLuver 2008-05-06 04:18:09 AMOMFG girl, that was perfect and amazing and sweet and exactly what would happen to me. You got me down to scratch, and loved the Joncer. And I'm with you for wanting to smack Brendon yourself...whoever knew he could be so annoying?
Author's responseI'm so glad you liked it =) I wanted this to be as good as I could get it so I took the time on the details, and do you have any idea how many paragraphs, let alone entire scenes I deleted cos they killed the flow? lol I was a frickin' perfectionist on this thing and it's good to know my efforts weren't for not =D.
I wanted to smack him around the third time lol but I think he got enough punishment from Spencer and Jon lol. I never noticed how cute Joncer was until I looked at pics of it for ideas on how to make them act with each other lol.
(#) girlinthemoon 2008-05-06 04:10:42 PMI really really liked this. Emmi is a lucky girl.
And as always, I thought your writing was amazing!
Author's response=D Glad you liked it Ms. Rayne. It's always nice to see another reveiw from you outside of Crashing Hearts =) Hopefully after I finish up Their Innocence, I can pick up more readers on Closet Lovers while I work on that one =)
(#) girlinthemoon 2008-05-07 02:09:10 AMCrashing Hearts may have been the first of your stories I read. But it won't be the last! I will, when I have time, read all of your work.
I just have to find the time. =)
Author's responseIt's nice to have you read any of my stories whenever you get the time =) I love all my readers =)
(#) MyChemicalDependency 2008-05-07 02:32:09 AMWow. This was actually excellent. SO fucking funny, I nearly killed myself laughing. The description and wording was all mint, and the only thing I can think of that wasn't pretty much perfect was the last few sentences. Not that they were bad, just not as fantastic as the rest of the story.
Anyways! I'm not just flattering you when I say that that was definitely the best one-shot I have ever read. =D
Author's responseHaha, I had a hard time keeping a straight face when I was writing this when I put Bren in lol. I had tears at one point I was laughing so hard lol. But thanks for the review hon! And thanks for taking the long ass time to read it lol
(#) infinite-oddity 2008-07-14 08:43:00 AMThis was amazing. I really enjoyed the action and relationships between all of Panic, and Brendons annoying bits. Those parts made me laugh.
Everything was just excellent. :D
Author's responseI loved it all too lol And I had myself giggling when I was writing certain parts lol That was my fic for RyanRossLuvr, and thankfully she liked it too =)
(#) doyleangel 2008-07-29 10:19:20 AMaw this was cute and adorable...glad ryro didn't stay too upset over keltie for long
Author's responseEh, no one liked her anyway, and Emmi is definitely A LOT better than Keltie anyday. I'm glad you liked the one-shot and thanks for the review =)
(#) Mrs_Stump221 2008-07-31 04:31:11 PMOMg i love it!!! its halrious.
Author's responseHehe, it's nice to see I'm still getting reviews for this one. Btw, there is a sequel for this but I'm not the one who wrote it. My girl, RyanRossLuver, wrote it a birthday gift for me since I told her she could do what she wanted with it since it was hers. So, shameless plug, http://www.ficwad.com/story/104115 go check it out!
- If only it wasnt a one-shot..... :( i really like it i wish there was another chapter but this is fine. I really like it! The part where Brendon kept peeking out made me laugh so hard, my friends had to duct-tape my mouth shut. (Seriously, my mouth is duct-taped shut!)