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Bedside Monster
(#) fruit_addict 2008-06-18
Very well written. Excellent discription. Somewhat creepy, but, it's all good. I found one mistake in the sentance, "he repeated to lonely room." I believe you forgot the word 'the'. Great Job!
Bedside Monster
(#) BlackAngelChick 2008-06-20
This is so cool! My only problem is that the little kid speaks too formally, but that could just be because she's a demon-thingy.
Yay creepy stories!!Bedside Monster
(#) flying_angel 2008-06-25
wow, this was awesome! I love how your descriptions flow. That was quite a twist at the end. Keep writing!
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