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Bedside Monster

Is the monster real?

Category: Horror - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama,Fantasy,Horror - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2008/05/18 - Updated: 2008/05/18 - 752 words - Complete

Reviews

• Bedside Monster

  (#) fruit_addict 2008-06-18 06:00:56 PM

  Very well written. Excellent discription. Somewhat creepy, but, it's all good. I found one mistake in the sentance, "he repeated to lonely room." I believe you forgot the word 'the'. Great Job!
  

• Bedside Monster

  (#) BlackAngelChick 2008-06-20 04:03:17 AM

  This is so cool! My only problem is that the little kid speaks too formally, but that could just be because she's a demon-thingy.
  Yay creepy stories!!

• Bedside Monster

  (#) flying_angel 2008-06-25 07:55:48 AM

  wow, this was awesome! I love how your descriptions flow. That was quite a twist at the end. Keep writing!

• Bedside Monster

  (#) linerlover 2008-07-03 12:23:28 PM

  oooh naiice.
  nicely done. creepy, but good.

• Bedside Monster

  (#) upinflames 2012-12-02 02:12:10 AM

  love. lovelovelove.

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