~Guest Appearence: WiL Francis!~ She's slipping, and crossing, and he doesn't care. [There's Words Now!]
- i really liked this chapter.
i don't think WiL is crazy (is he?) cause this just shows how her life can never be the same again, even if she did get out. people will figure she's one of them, just like WiL did. who'd believe her? especially when these guys have never been caught. if she got out, the guys would have to leave the house and start over at somewhere else and how would that look to the police for example? her family's dead, she's alive. she's probably get a life sentence. ain't life unfair lol, it's not like she did anything to deserve this. either she gets out and most likely goes to prison, or she dies, or she's stuck with these dudes for the rest of her life...
amazing story, keep it up!
(#) IllKillYou 2008-06-07 09:41:04 AMOMG WiL FRANCIS!
I LOVE YOU!
You're the besssst!
I'm happy with the way Adie is. I usually hate chick characters, but Adie's pretty good.
Did you, by any chance, get the inspiration from her name from Mrs Adrienne Armstrong, formerly Adrienne Nesser?
It's a nice name.
It's a annoying when people give mary sues gay names. I hate fics when the girl character's name is Helena. Or Bella. Or Ebony.
Anyway I'm raving on now.
(#) XxCRYSTALLINExX 2008-07-03 02:20:59 PMI actually cried at several points in this story, partly at when she turned into one of them, partly when you killed off WiL :.( Actually, on second thoughts, I may be because I am listening to cancer. I'm just to emotional, goddamn it! runs away, bawling like a baby