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A Fateful Meeting
1 ReviewsPre-series. How might the first meeting between Brains and Jeff Tracy gone?
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A Fateful Meeting
(#) hobbeth 2006-03-05 07:21:55 PM
This would have been a better story if you had paid more attention to - or had a beta correct - your punctuation. There were too many run-on sentences, also. All this took away from my enjoyment of the story.