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A Fateful Meeting

by andrewjameswilliams 1 Reviews

Pre-series. How might the first meeting between Brains and Jeff Tracy gone?

Category: Thunderbirds - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters:  - Published: 2006/02/18 - Updated: 2006/02/18 - 3862 words - Complete

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  • A Fateful Meeting

    (#) hobbeth 2006-03-05 07:21:55 PM

    This would have been a better story if you had paid more attention to - or had a beta correct - your punctuation. There were too many run-on sentences, also. All this took away from my enjoyment of the story.

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