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Benediction
2 ReviewsAravis thought that she had a right to be proud of how well she'd grown accustomed to life in Archenland over the years.
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Benediction
(#) Ithilwen 2008-08-23 05:15:37 PM
Heh. Nice twist and nice premise, but your tenses seem to jump back and forth a bit. -
Benediction
(#) bgoldnyxnet 2008-12-16 11:17:26 AM
An interesting and original idea. The final ending is perhaps a little cliche, but I don't feel like downrating this for that.
Very short, but I think the right length for this story. And it has that all-important feel that the writer knows more about the character than he is telling us, which gives depth to a story.