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• Rubik's Cube

  (#) hermitrisin 2008-06-09

  i really like the intensity about this piece. my only criticism is that the specific focus on the reader in certain areas seem a bit self-conscious and detract a bit from the overall tone (for example the "dear reader" in the second paragraph)however the piece works well with them regardless. nice work.

• Rubik's Cube

  (#) ShutMeUp_ 2008-10-25

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