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4 reviewsCan't relly think of a way to summarize this chapter without giving everything away so all I'll say is: continues on from the last chapter. hehe
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Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) MrSz-Or3o 2008-06-07
OMG OMG!
i can't believe this
all if it
Brendon sayin it meant nothing..
ryan killing them...both
OH GOD write more soooonAuthor's response
i know, he's cruel isnt he. lol.Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) linerlover 2008-06-07
awh man. brendon is an idiot.
pleasepleaseplease write me soon. =]Author's response
he is isnt he. but at least hes a cute idiot. another chapters up so.... yeahBet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-07
"What am I some cheap slut you can have your way with anytime you fucking want? Who the fuck do you think you are? Who the fuck do you think I am? I should fucking castrate you and hang your goddamned balls from the ceiling fan! And to think I looked at you like you were something relatively worth my time."
God, how I wished Ryan did say that to Brendon. That bitch.
It's sad how Brendon plays around with Ryan's heart so much, and then telling him that it meant absolutely nothing to him for what the had done, was heartbreaking. Not only to Ryan, but to the readers as well. It made Brendon come off as a cocky jerk, especially since he betrayed his fiancee with Ryan, causing the playing of Ryan's heart. And it wasn't just a betrayal to Ryan, but Aymi(sp?) as well. And the fact that Brendon said that it meant nothing, implied that Ryan meant nothing to him.
The murder of Aymi(sp?) was jaw dropping. I wasn't expecting it. I was truly believing that Ryan would come to his senses and not kill anyone, as Brendon falls for Ryan and nobody hears from the girl ever again. But, I love that you didn't turn to the cliche route and have everyone live happily ever after. It was such a relief. I applaud you for doing the unexpected. That's what I love about this story. It's so unpredictable. And that's wayy more than I can say for a lot of fics around here.
I'm wondering this, did he kill Brendon as well? I didn't quite understand. Mostly because I was reading so fast because I wanted to see what happens. The suspense was killing me! I was at the edge of my seat.
Off to read the next chappy!Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) MyNomDePlume 2012-04-22
Wait, WTF JUST HAPPENED?!?!?!?!?!?!
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